Two One Words in One : mist and reveal
This is what happens when I try to go by the OneWord one minute timer:
She walked silently, feet bare on slippery moss. Barely breathing but urgency moving her forward before the mist could clear and reveal her hiding place. If she could just make it to..
Okay, now we’re all busted: ain’t none of us been playin’ by the rules.
I like the rhyme of “bare feet” and “barely breathing.” And I love this vignette…
It was kind of fun to leave it hanging out there in the mist, wondering what she was running from…and to.