Sunday Scribbling prompt 224: Source OneWord: Commit
there is pain in being filled
and pain in being poured out
one connects us to the source
and once committed to the course
prayer the only upward route
outward love the needed skill
Sunday Scribbling prompt 224: Source OneWord: Commit
there is pain in being filled
and pain in being poured out
one connects us to the source
and once committed to the course
prayer the only upward route
outward love the needed skill
What a beautiful collection of important words and phrases culminating in the last line’s great words of wisdom.
thank you sir 🙂
Very good. Has an “old world” feel to the words, and the flow.
Thank you Bernard!
This one was so deep. Excellent.
short…beautiful…awesome
Concise and beautiful!
Pamela
Very neatly written and maintaining the point too!
thanks all – I was trying not to write a volume for once 🙂
Very nice. I like the first two lines especially.
Thank you for your kind comment on my blog. 🙂
Hi Dee..beautiful words..felt compelled to read but am frustrated that I can’t share anything back right now..I did try to post but am away from home and can’t for the life of me remember my website address (poor head!)..Anyway, there is something new there and thanks for your warm wishes..Jae
Thank you Jae – sending good thoughts!
I love those first 2 lines too. Very thoughtful.
Thank you Linda 🙂
A lovely prayer. At some point you may want to collect your prayers and hymns into a chapbook (prayerbook) of their own.