through my eyes
the wrinkles fade
the years part
like the red sea
and I journey safely
to the place
to a wedding with
bluebonnets on an arch
love is a feast
that never ended
forever is now
and then and
tomorrow we bring
all the moments
to the table
hunger grows up
and never satisfied
perpetually filled
by your eyes
Beautiful… would make a wonderful anniversary gift (in case you hadn’t thought of that already)
way wrong time of year but yes I was feeling a bit smooshy 🙂
this was very touching, a wonderful expression of love.
thank you 🙂
Just beautiful, I loved this :o)
Thanks!
…hunger grows up
and never satisfied
perpetually filled
by your eyes…
…enjoyed these lines and this piece…felt.
thank you – I’m glad.
You certainly capture the joy, the romance,the thrill and the comfort in a loving relationship. Great words of love.
I am humbly grateful – you would know after fifty years of marriage 🙂 Thank you.
Beautiful! 🙂
Lovely piece Dee – connecting with someone completely is an eye sparkling thing!..Jae 🙂
Short and sweet capturing Love beautifully!!
So sweet !!! and unique too 🙂
G’Day Dee, I just came by for a look and found this lovely poem of yours. It is my 30th wedding anniversary. Can I plagiarize this ? Huh Huh. It is so lovely.
You are certainly welcome to borrow it for an anniversary – we were married thirty years this year too – beat you by about 4 months 🙂