the sun so loud it hurts my ears
and even as the night would cool
I feel the heat brush tree limbs bare
and paints a sky that once knew blue
but bids us peace with brighter hue
a fierce reminder daylight wins
and as a planet silent spins
the sunset chorus covers sins
dawn will come the dance begins
but just for now keep watch and see
a symphony of light for free
That is a strong sun – sometimes it does indeed feel loud – but when loud is a symphony that’s good 🙂
I’ve never been great at poetry, but I can appreciate the beauty of this poem. Such vivid imagery, too.
I also noticed you have Terrible Minds on your Author list on the side. I’m a huge fan of Chuck’s blog!