4 thoughts on “We Walked By The Lake”

1. paschal March 21, 2010 at 1:09 pm

   Great lyrics – this beauty needs music. Call Joni and work out the details.
   1. Dee Post authorMarch 21, 2010 at 2:05 pm

      daydreaming about spring that dropped in and then flew off as quickly as it appeared. Here’s hoping the blackbirds haven’t gone far…
2. Lilibeth March 23, 2010 at 5:58 pm

   I don’t always like this form of poetry, but it works here….almost like there is so little to say we have to repeat what is obvious to fill up the space. Nice.
   1. Dee Post authorMarch 23, 2010 at 7:16 pm

      Thank you! It’s an interesting exercise in discipline to me, to fit what you want to say in a structure of limited syllable and still have beauty.

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